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Drache VonNazi

THE STATISTICS;;

BIRTH NAME;; Drache VonNazi
NAME;; Drache
AGE IN YEARS;; 2
GENDER;; Female
BREED;; belgian malinois

DIG DEEPER;;

PERSONALITY;; Drache is one nasty dog. If you seam weak she will kill you, especially if you are not a pure bread. She thinks that mix dogs are not worth her time. To put it simply she is one nasty dog. She has killed pups for the simple reason of one of them mouthing off to her. The one thing she likes is power, and pure breeding. The only use she has for pups is if there strong and pure blooded, and the more aggressive they are the better. If she ever had any she might become nicer and less blood thirsty. He past as messed her up and her brain is so focused on aggression and power that she dose not see the things she is doing. When she was younger she was an adorable sweet pup, that saw the goodness in the world, but not she is a twisted young adult with a messed of view of what is going on around her and what she is doing.
VOICE;; harsh and gravely German
DESCRIPTION;; Drache is long and muscular. She has been fighting sense she was a pup. She is solid black wit no white on her body at all. She has black brown eyes a soul even darker. Her ears stand up striate on her head, she is missing peaces of her ears from fights. She has bad hips from in breeding and she is blind in one eyes. She also had a lowered seance of hearing because of her inbreeding. She will not live long because of her way of life and the inbreeding is making her body weaker and weaker each year.
HISTORY;; Drache was born to a large pack of belgian malinois. When she was less than a year old her sister had pups. But they were not pure blooded. When the pack leaded found out he had Drache kill her sister and the pups. For a while after that she was messed up. Then one day she heard a young dog talking to some others about a mix breed that she had seen. Hearing this she git angry and killed them. She was driven from the pack because she could not prove that they had been talking about another dog. When she was driven out she went crazy and started killing non pure bread dogs, and any other dog that angered her.

LOOK CLOSER;;

TALKING;; "Vat doh you dink you are dohing you vertlezz mutt?!"
LISTENING;; Vat doh you dink you are dohing you vertlezz mutt?!
THINKING;; 'Vat doh you dink you are dohing you vertlezz mutt?!'
ALIGNMENT;; The Citizens
RANK;; just a normal twisted dog
OTHER;; Nein

CREATED BY;;
Circus, CR to Senshi Lane. Don't steal.

Don't you dare look at him in the eye, as we dance with the devil tonight!

[nanaku]

Just curious, is she like some sort of twisted nazi-ish dog?

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ja :]

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Not Accepted as some changes need to be made.
1) The picture and description you have are not a Belgian Malinois, it is a Belgian Sheepdog. This is a Belgian Malinois: Click!
2) I'm assuming she is from Germany since she has such a strong accent, but a clear location of origin would be appreciated in her history or somewhere else.
3) There are several grammar and spelling errors throughout her history, description, and personality. Since this is a literate Roleplay, we appreciate proper English.

It looks really great, but just the few minor adjustments need to be made. =]